意临贤教序、请砸!

酌墨居士

意临贤教序、请砸

王裕昂

全然是自已的笔法，谈不上临。意临也不是这种概念。建议你还是先过对临这一关。不要太急躁。学书法不是这样的！

hanjiang

这种写法很不可取，没技术含量
也学不到东西，仅是抄书

船山居士

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秋风

[whitepad]***700;400;700,400;;*4.5; m189,52 l189,42,190,41,190,39,192,38,194,38,195,37,198,35,201,35,204,34,219,31,278,31 e|********* m221,43 l220,47,219,49,217,54,214,58,212,63,208,72,207,75,204,81,201,84,200,90,198,96,196,100,196,104,202,104,204,103,206,101,209,97,214,93,217,86,222,77 226,71 e|********* m249,44 l250,45,250,86,249,91,249,95,248,98,246,101,244,109,242,111,241,114,241,116,239,118,239,121,238,121,237,114,233,103,233,99 e|********* m230,62 l230,63,231,63,231,68,228,71,228,72,227,73,226,73,226,80,227,81,227,82,229,86,229,92,227,97,226,98,222,104,218,109,205,122,201,125,194,129,192,131 193,131,195,130,198,129,212,120,218,116,225,112,228,112,230,110,248,94,276,68,280,64,283,62,283,69,282,74,279,88,277,95,276,97,276,98,275,100,275,97 277,86 e|********* m291,62 l301,61,308,61,312,63,314,65,314,68,312,69,311,71,309,73,308,75,304,77,301,80,296,84,291,90,290,91,289,91,297,95,302,97,309,100,315,102,317,102 315,105,313,106,292,115,261,126,259,126,258,127,255,127,259,134,261,147,261,151,260,155,258,159,246,188,245,189,245,190,246,189,246,186,245,183,245,176,248,174 247,175,248,175,250,174,251,173,253,172,258,172,260,173,261,175,261,177,260,178,260,179,257,183,255,184,253,187,246,191,242,196,241,197,241,198,265,198,262,197 e|********* m239,225 l233,256,231,259,230,261,228,264,228,265,226,266,226,256 e|********* m218,220 l218,230,217,231,217,233,215,234,215,242,214,244,213,247,212,249,211,252,209,256,209,259,208,259,208,260,207,260,207,261,217,257,224,256,244,248,274,230,281,225 300,212,300,215,299,218,288,247,278,273,277,278,277,281,276,283,277,283,278,282,279,279,282,266 e|********* m294,234 l298,234,304,235,316,238,317,239,316,241,314,242,313,244,307,247,306,249,306,250,305,251,305,252,306,252,306,255,307,257,307,259,308,266,309,267,313,267,313,268 311,269,309,271,299,276,297,278,294,279,292,279,285,280,269,280 e|********* m59,102 l54,136,51,147,45,159,43,162,42,167,40,170,39,175,37,177,37,181,36,183,36,184,35,184,35,186,34,187,33,187,34,184,37,174,43,140,51,124,53,122 58,118,60,118,63,115,75,114,82,114,82,116,81,120,79,123,78,125,74,129,73,131,72,131,71,132,72,133,77,142,77,147,75,152,72,157,70,159,68,160 66,164,65,165,65,168,66,167,69,165,77,152,84,143,105,118,108,115,114,110,130,110,132,111,132,112,133,112,133,115,132,117,127,126,122,131,115,136,113,137 108,139,105,139,105,135,106,134,108,133,111,132,122,132,128,135,132,138,133,139,131,139,127,140,117,144,84,160,73,167,67,175,67,177,69,177,80,172,94,170 107,168,114,168,114,182,111,187,108,189,107,187,107,183,106,183,100,186,91,194,80,201,77,204,73,206,77,206,92,210,100,214,100,215,101,217,102,218,102,221 103,223,103,224,101,224,100,223,96,221 e|********* m341,22 l343,22,343,25,339,23,335,20,330,19,330,18,328,18,328,30 e|********* m190,185 l197,196,197,197,198,198,190,198,189,199,188,199,186,200,187,200,189,201 e|********* m135,85 l138,91,139,91,139,87,143,87,145,89 e|********* m23,227 l27,231,31,236,31,237,30,237,29,236,28,236,28,235,25,235,25,236,24,237,24,240,23,242,23,246 e|********* m112,251 l108,265,107,270,96,292,96,293,95,294 e|********* m89,310 l89,313,90,318,90,317,92,309 e|********* m130,261 l120,293,117,300,108,324,108,325,107,326,106,326 e|********* m103,341 l103,345,106,341,111,332,113,329,113,327,116,323 e|********* m152,277 l150,290,148,295,140,318,139,324,137,326,137,327,135,329,135,332,134,333,132,334,132,336,128,342,128,344,126,347,125,349,123,350,121,354,119,356,119,358,118,359 117,359,117,358 e|********* m107,377 l107,375,108,373,108,372,109,372,109,373,110,371 e[/whitepad]

经天

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淡然

还是学古人的好,这亲只会害了自己.

曲水信步

原帖由 hanjiang 于 2007-9-27 19:00 发表

                               
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这种写法很不可取，没技术含量
也学不到东西，仅是抄书

抄书还偷工减料,四(时)无形.

破俑

还是先别搞什么意临的吧^^^^^^^^em6 em6