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临得不错。em1 em1 em1

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原帖由 潇潇临风 于 2007-10-6 18:33 发表

                               
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临得不错。em1 em1 em1

提点意见吧！em2 em2 em2 em13 em13 em13 em13

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[whitepad]***700;400;700,400;#c60;*3; m94,68 l94,67,93,68,89,73,88,75,85,79,83,82,78,88,77,89,73,94,70,97,69,99,67,101 e|********* m80,104 l80,106,81,107,82,109,82,121,79,127,79,128,75,134,73,141,69,147,68,150,58,162,56,164,55,166,51,170,49,171,48,173,46,174,45,175,44,175,44,176 e|********* m61,174 l64,181,65,183,65,184,66,189,67,195,67,234 e|********* m107,85 l107,89,110,94,110,102,111,107,112,113,113,118,114,124,115,125,116,127,116,129,117,131,118,132,119,134,119,135 e|********* m118,94 l118,90,120,86,121,85,123,81,125,79,127,78,131,74,135,72,136,71,140,70,142,69,144,69,145,68,153,68,159,74,161,78,162,79,162,83,163,85,163,122 161,129,160,134,159,137,157,142,156,144,156,147 e|********* m133,118 l133,111,134,109,135,108,137,107,138,106,140,105,142,105,145,108,145,116,143,120,142,121,138,129 e|********* m133,135 l135,134,136,133,144,133,145,135,146,136,147,138,147,140,146,144,145,145,144,147,141,151,137,155,135,156,134,156,130,158,129,159,127,160,126,161,125,161,124,162 123,162,124,161,131,157,141,152,149,149,154,145,155,145,159,143,160,142,164,140,165,140,165,139,166,139 e|********* m96,197 l97,197,101,196,106,196,108,195,114,194,123,192,137,188,144,185,156,181,161,178,163,177,168,175,174,173,179,169,181,169,186,165,190,164,192,163,194,163,194,162 195,162 e|********* m153,163 l153,164,154,166,155,171,157,177,160,182,161,185,165,195,166,200,167,202,168,203,168,217,169,222,169,230,168,231,167,231,165,233,161,235,158,235,156,236,146,236 145,235,139,232,138,230,137,229,134,223,133,222,133,205,134,203,135,202,139,202,141,203,142,204,144,205,146,205,148,207,148,214,147,216,142,221,138,223,134,224 133,225,120,225 e|********* m258,151 l259,151,264,149,270,148,271,148,273,147,278,146,283,146,285,145,289,144,291,143,292,142,296,140,297,139,301,139 e|********* m261,171 l286,171,288,170,289,169,291,168,292,167,294,167,297,164,298,164,298,163,300,161 e|********* m234,196 l233,196,233,197,242,201,249,202,257,203,291,203,296,201,298,200,301,198,303,197,304,196,306,195,308,195,310,194,324,194,325,193 e|********* m415,114 l413,115,409,121,405,128,400,135,391,153,388,164,386,176,384,186,382,198,380,208,380,238 e|********* m406,170 l409,167,410,165,412,163,413,161,415,160,419,156,420,154,422,154,426,152,434,152,435,154,437,156,438,158,440,168,440,175,441,185,441,191,439,198,438,205,437,208 435,212,434,213,434,215,427,215,425,214,422,213,415,213,414,212,413,210,413,209,416,196,419,190,423,185,429,177,436,169,445,161,468,148,483,141,499,137,518,132 535,129,553,128,571,126,613,126,611,127,603,133,592,140,580,146,539,173,525,183,513,192,504,199,496,205,492,209,490,210,489,210,488,211,488,209,507,197,516,193 526,189,537,185,549,183,579,177,588,176,595,174,599,173,601,172,603,170,604,170 e|********* m553,98 l554,100,554,222,550,224,546,224,541,225,534,227,526,228,519,229,513,230,508,230,503,231,493,231,492,230,492,227,496,223,509,215,514,212 e|********* m583,207 l587,211,588,213,592,216,596,218,598,218,602,222,605,222,609,224,609,225,584,225 e[/whitepad]

刘光智

亮兄临作结体尚可，但还笔法不到位，概初临的原故吧！用狼毫临习不如兼毫，静海王政通，孙伯翔老得意弟子，写碑功夫不在胡先生之下，有时间，弟带兄可去讨教几招。
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原帖由 刘光智 于 2007-10-6 19:47 发表

                               
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亮兄临作结体尚可，但还笔法不到位，概初临的原故吧！用狼毫临习不如兼毫，静海王政通，孙伯翔老得意弟子，写碑功夫不在胡先生之下，有时间，弟带兄可去讨教几招。
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谢谢老弟的指点，我初临猛龙碑，还没抓住要领，决心好好临一临！em13 em13 em13 em13 em13

古槐居士

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感觉结体上和原帖出入比较大，张猛龙的结体是一大特色。呵呵
细细体会  ～～～em2

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原帖由 古槐居士 于 2007-10-7 00:06 发表

                               
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感觉结体上和原帖出入比较大，张猛龙的结体是一大特色。呵呵
细细体会  ～～～em2

接受了，我会认真体会的！em13 em13 em13 em13 em13

学写字

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沧海月明

已有所得,恭喜.