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[whitepad]***700;400;700,400;;** m544,132 l544,130,545,128,546,124,547,123,550,117,552,114,554,113,558,107,563,103,567,98,569,96,573,94,574,92,576,90,577,91,577,106,575,113,573,131,571,145,569,152 565,180,564,185,563,191,563,197,562,201,561,203,561,208 e|********* m569,143 l570,139,570,136,571,134,572,133,575,127,575,126,579,124,581,122,582,120,587,120,591,124,594,131,595,132,597,138,598,139,599,143,600,145,600,177,599,179,598,182 598,187,596,191,596,192,595,194,593,196,591,197,589,197,586,198,584,199,579,199,577,198,573,194,570,190,568,186,566,185,563,181,562,179,560,177,559,175,558,174 558,173,556,171,556,164,557,162,562,157,563,155,569,151,576,147,582,144,585,143,587,142,591,142,593,146,594,147,594,154,593,156,589,161,588,163,583,167,582,169 576,174,567,180,553,190,547,193,543,197,539,199,534,200,532,202,537,199,554,191,564,185,587,174,598,171,606,168,615,164,620,162,621,160,623,160,624,159,624,158 626,156,626,154,625,150,623,149,618,142 e|********* m586,119 l584,124,583,125,583,132,581,139,580,145,578,151,578,159,574,180,573,184,573,190,572,191,572,192 e|********* m425,111 l423,118,423,139,424,141,429,146,434,149,435,150,439,150,440,149 e|********* m447,116 l444,119,441,125,440,126,437,132,437,134,435,135,434,137,432,139,430,139,428,141,428,142,427,142,426,143,426,144,413,144,413,143,414,137,415,136,420,130,422,128 427,124,430,122,447,114,448,113,454,110,456,110,458,109,460,107,465,107,467,109,467,111,468,113,469,114,469,120,468,121,467,123,464,128,460,132,456,137,452,141 450,142,449,143,447,142,445,138,444,137,444,134,449,129,451,129,455,133,455,135,456,136,458,140,458,141,456,145 e|********* m426,166 l427,166,429,165,436,165,437,164,439,163,449,163,450,162,452,161,467,161,468,163,469,164,471,168,471,193,468,199,466,200,461,205,457,207,456,207,452,205,450,203 447,196,445,191,444,185,441,180,440,176,440,157,441,155,442,154,443,152,443,169,442,171,440,172,437,177,435,178,425,188,424,190,420,193,417,196,416,196,415,197 e|********* m307,142 l306,143,312,143,320,139,326,137,331,136,335,134,336,134,338,132,340,131,343,131,347,135,349,140,350,142,352,147,353,154,353,171,352,173,351,174,349,178,346,181 344,181,342,180,341,178,339,173,338,167,337,159,336,152,336,128,332,142,328,150,324,162,322,164,321,166,313,174,312,176,308,182,299,191,295,193 e|********* m185,105 l186,106,190,107,202,107,207,105,213,103,214,102,216,102,220,98,221,96,224,92,230,86,229,90,222,100,217,106,212,114,207,120,196,133,193,137,191,141,204,135 211,133,225,126,226,125,228,124,232,123,234,123,235,122,237,121,239,121,240,123,240,126,239,133,237,135,234,139,232,141,226,144,225,145,221,147,220,148,219,148 217,147,215,145,214,143,211,140,208,134,208,129,209,129,210,128,211,129,214,133,215,134,216,136,217,140,217,170,216,172,215,176,214,178,213,179,213,181,212,183 210,183,208,184,207,185,205,186,197,186,193,184,192,183,190,182,189,182,189,181,186,178,186,174,187,173,206,173,210,175,211,176,215,178,217,178,218,179,222,179 223,180,227,182,231,183,232,184,236,185,238,186,242,186,243,187,245,188,247,190,249,191,252,197,249,200,247,201,243,202,238,202 e|********* m49,117 l61,117,67,115,69,115,74,114,78,113,79,113,83,111,84,112,85,116,85,136,86,138,87,139,89,143,92,146,98,151,100,152,101,153,105,154,107,156,107,157 108,159,109,162,110,163,110,168,108,172,106,173,102,177,98,180,96,182,90,185,84,185,82,184,81,183,75,180,74,178,70,175,68,174,66,172,64,169,62,167 62,166,60,162,59,158,58,157,58,155,57,153,56,152,56,138,57,144,57,167,58,165,72,151,76,149,76,148,78,148,79,149,82,155,83,162,83,178,81,182 79,184,77,184,73,186,64,186,58,183,57,182,53,180,52,180,51,179,51,172,53,171,55,169,58,165,60,164,62,164,64,163,65,162,67,161,71,160,74,158 76,157,81,157,83,156,87,155,98,155,99,154,103,153,108,152,112,151,122,151,123,152,125,156,126,157,129,163,129,170 e[/whitepad]

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[whitepad]***700;400;700,400;;#f06;9; m103,34 l104,34,104,45,103,47,93,64,91,67,88,70,86,73,85,75,84,78,83,80,83,82,88,82,90,83,93,85,96,86,98,88,101,90,101,91,102,91,102,101 101,102,101,104,100,106,100,107,99,108,98,111,96,113,96,115,94,118,92,120,91,124,89,126,81,138,79,143,77,145,75,148,70,153,70,154,67,157,65,158 63,161,63,162,61,162,61,163,58,166,57,166,56,168,53,171,52,171,52,166,53,163 e|********* m106,118 l107,118,108,119,108,122,109,124,109,149,108,151,108,153,107,154,107,156 e|********* m130,59 l139,57,142,55,148,55,154,53,167,53,170,51,173,51,175,50,176,49,177,49,178,48,180,48,180,57,178,66,176,74,174,77,173,80,171,85,169,88,166,94 165,94,164,95,164,96,162,92 e|********* m151,74 l174,74,174,75,173,77,173,78,172,78,171,80,171,83,170,84,168,87,162,93,160,97,158,99,157,99,156,100,156,101,172,101,174,100,174,98,172,96,166,91 164,88 e|********* m145,75 l145,87,143,93,143,153,142,155,142,157,140,161,140,163,138,167,138,169,137,171,137,172,136,173,136,180,153,180,159,177,164,176,168,174,178,168,182,164,183,162 184,161,185,159,185,121 e|********* m185,111 l184,113,183,114,182,116,181,116,180,118,176,122,175,124,170,125,168,127,157,127,156,126,155,124,155,123,154,123,154,122,153,121,153,117,162,117,166,118,168,119 169,119,171,121,175,123,176,125,178,127,180,128,181,131,184,134,193,142,195,145,197,146,199,148,199,150,202,153,203,153,203,154,204,155,206,156,209,159,209,161 210,161,212,162,213,162,216,165,218,166,226,166 e|********* m275,33 l275,40,274,43,274,46,271,49,270,52,268,57,267,60,261,69,252,81,250,84,246,88,244,92,240,96,238,99,237,100,235,101,235,102,233,103,232,104,231,104 229,105,225,106,219,106,219,104,218,102,217,101,217,91,219,87,220,84,222,83,226,79,230,77,233,76,237,75,242,72,246,71,254,71,272,66,277,65,284,65 290,62,293,61,295,61,297,60,303,60,305,59,307,59,311,57,312,57 e|********* m290,79 l287,87,286,88,286,90,283,93,282,97,281,100,279,103,279,107,277,111,275,116,275,120,273,126,273,129,271,134,271,139,269,144,269,148,267,152,267,174,266,173 266,169,263,155 e|********* m290,91 l291,90,293,90,293,89,294,89,294,88,295,88,296,87,297,87,297,85,298,85,298,84,300,82,301,82,302,81,303,81,303,82,304,84,304,133,305,140,305,146 306,149,306,152,307,161,308,164,308,167,309,170,309,173,310,179,310,190,309,190,308,189,306,186,305,183,302,182,299,179,296,177,292,176,288,172,287,170,285,169 283,167,282,165,282,163,280,159,279,156,279,151 e|********* m281,121 l282,120,284,119,286,119,288,118,298,118,298,122,297,122,297,125,294,128,294,130,293,130,293,131,292,131,291,132,290,132,290,133,288,135,287,137,287,142,289,143 296,143 e|********* m354,81 l355,83,357,85,358,85,358,87,360,89,363,89,364,88,366,88,366,87,379,87,379,89,374,94,373,96,369,98,363,102,353,110,347,114,346,116,344,117,343,118 343,119,346,119,353,114,362,111,369,111,376,109,385,106,389,106,393,104,398,103,401,102,403,101,406,100,409,100,412,98,419,97,425,96,435,93,465,93,465,103 464,104,464,105,463,105,463,114,461,117,461,119,456,129,454,130,452,132,452,133,448,133,441,127,438,123,434,119,433,117,432,117,431,113,430,112,429,110 e|********* m430,63 l430,73,428,76,427,81,424,92,423,95,420,106,419,110,415,118,414,121,414,123,411,129,411,131,410,132,410,134,409,135,408,137,407,137,404,140,404,141,402,142 401,144,399,145,398,147,395,148,394,148,390,150,385,150,384,149 e|********* m512,85 l523,86,568,86,568,89,567,90,566,93,565,95,563,101,562,102,562,105,561,107,558,117,558,118,557,122,556,124,556,125,553,125,552,124,546,121,543,119,540,115 538,113,535,111,534,109,533,108,531,108,530,106,530,103 e|********* m538,56 l538,65,536,68,536,71,534,74,534,79,530,90,527,96,524,104,523,107,519,115,519,117,515,123,515,124,512,127,510,128,508,132,505,135,502,137,502,138,501,139 495,142,493,142,490,143,481,143 e|********* m83,234 l83,236,81,240,79,242,77,246,74,249,74,250,77,250,77,256,78,258,79,259,79,260,80,261,81,263,82,264,84,268,84,280,83,282,83,288,82,289,82,291 81,294,81,295,80,298,80,303,79,308,79,310,78,312,78,317,76,321,76,323,74,326,73,328,73,329,72,329,72,333,71,333,71,334,72,333,76,330,78,328 82,325,85,322,93,310,101,293,107,275 e|********* m117,245 l120,250,121,251,130,251,133,249,153,249,148,245,144,239,143,235,143,231,144,240,145,254,146,262,147,267,148,279,148,299,147,299,146,297,139,292,135,289,130,285 129,284,129,283,128,283,128,281,132,276,134,276,139,271,142,270,150,266,152,266,152,265,161,265,161,267,160,268,158,269,157,272,152,276,145,283,142,285,140,286 139,287,137,287,137,286,143,280,145,279,150,279,153,282,155,283,156,285,157,286,163,291,164,293,167,295 e|********* m94,257 l97,263,100,267,101,269,103,271,104,271,104,275,105,282,107,286,107,294,108,296,108,304,109,306,112,311,113,312,113,313,116,317,118,318,126,321,163,321,163,320 e|********* m220,229 l218,229,217,231,215,232,213,234,210,235,207,237,204,241,201,244,199,248,197,249,197,251,198,252,200,253,201,254,201,255,202,256,204,260,204,266,200,271,200,274 197,277,195,281,195,287,196,287,198,290,198,305,196,308,195,312,192,321,190,325,190,328,189,329,189,332,191,332,193,331,196,329,201,327,207,323,216,318,230,311 237,307,245,303,254,294 e|********* m239,241 l246,239,249,236,253,235,260,233,264,232,272,229,318,229,317,228,311,224 e|********* m290,213 l288,215,286,219,284,222,279,230,278,233,276,235,275,237,275,239,274,240,272,243,273,244,277,246,285,247,291,248,294,249,296,250,298,250,298,254,297,255,294,257 293,257,290,259,290,260,286,262,281,264,262,264,264,266,266,267,267,267,269,268,270,270,272,271,275,273,272,273 e|********* m256,274 l256,277,260,281,264,281,266,282,267,283,267,284,269,286,270,286,271,287,271,288,266,288 e|********* m224,300 l223,303,222,304,222,308,223,309,238,309,242,307,248,307,254,305,268,305,272,303,288,301,290,301,293,299,303,299,306,297,319,297,319,296,317,294,307,289 e|********* m289,273 l289,279,287,282,287,287,286,289,286,292,285,294,284,295,282,300,281,302,279,304,278,306,275,309,274,309,273,310,271,311,269,313,262,313,261,312,260,312,260,311 259,310 e|********* m289,289 l289,290,288,291,288,292,287,293,287,294,286,296,285,297,285,299,284,300,284,302,282,304,281,304,281,305,280,306,280,307,278,307,277,308,277,309,275,311,274,311 272,313,272,314,271,316,269,316,268,317,268,318,266,320,264,320,264,321,261,322,261,323,259,323,258,324,257,324,256,325,242,325,242,324,240,322 e|********* m287,320 l293,324,294,325,296,326,297,328,300,331,303,333,304,333,306,334,306,335,308,337,309,337,309,338,310,338,312,339,316,339 e|********* m369,216 l369,259,371,261,371,264,372,264,373,266,374,267,374,268,375,268,377,270,379,271,381,273,384,274,387,276,390,277,398,281,400,283,399,283,398,281 e|********* m388,237 l387,238,387,241,386,243,383,246,383,251,380,253,379,256,378,258,378,260,374,263,365,274,361,278,359,279,351,281,342,277,341,277,338,274,338,273,337,272,337,271 335,269,335,263,338,263,340,262,342,258,344,257,347,255,350,254,358,250,360,248,364,247,368,245,382,242,393,239,399,239,411,237,434,235,442,235,450,233,456,233 456,232,458,232,458,231,456,233,446,242,423,265,419,267,417,269,417,270,411,270,409,268,406,264,405,263,405,255,406,253,409,250,416,250,419,253,421,254,422,255 423,255,427,259,433,262,434,262,436,264,438,264,442,266 e|********* m373,286 l381,288,387,288,390,289,402,289,409,290,415,290,416,291,416,317,415,319,413,322,413,324,411,325,410,327,408,329,405,331,404,333,400,337,398,338,397,338,397,336 390,322,390,312 e|********* m414,279 l410,283,405,287,398,294,395,296,385,306,375,313,372,314,369,316,367,318,365,321,362,322,361,322,360,323,351,323,350,322,350,320,349,319,348,317 e|********* m454,282 l471,280,512,280,513,281,513,282,515,284,516,286,517,287,518,289,518,299,516,302,515,305,514,309,513,312,511,315,509,321,508,323,506,325,505,327,504,327,503,328 497,328,494,324,493,321,491,319,490,316,488,313 e|********* m506,260 l505,261,504,263,503,266,498,275,495,280,486,291,474,305,472,307,470,310,462,318,460,319,459,322,455,324,453,326,451,327,439,327,439,326,437,324 e[/whitepad]em28

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