《青少年书法》、书法网联袂推出“经典竞临”第五期：《礼器碑》

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临《礼器碑》的一点感想

                                                                         张茹

通过这些天对《礼器碑》的学习，我才深切的感受到：习书并不只是临摹与创作那么简单，更多的时候需要我们总结、分析和归类。
谈到分析，离不开读帖，只有在读帖的过程中，你才会发现那些在临帖时没有领悟到的东西。最先开始我并不知道这些，所以临帖时只是一味的追求形式上的相似，把一个字写的和字帖上的大小几乎不差分毫，但从整体上看老觉得缺点什么。后来，偶尔在网上看到林散之先生临的《礼器碑》，发现他改变了原碑方圆兼备的用笔特征，变圆为方，将此碑如锥画沙的一面淋漓尽致的表现了出来。作品中充满了静雅之气。学习林老先生的作品我才猛然间醒悟，其实我的作品中缺少的是神韵，是对古帖的认识！
《礼器碑》刻于东汉永寿二年。现存曲阜孔庙内。与《史晨碑》、《乙瑛碑》一起称为“庙堂三巨制”。此碑用笔变化多端，线条轻重分明，字如铁笔勾勒，笔力强健、方中见圆，结体瘦劲宽绰、平正中求奇求变，表现出一种超凡脱俗的气质。
初学此碑时最好能将读帖与临摹相结合。在读帖时将此碑的笔法、结体和审美做以总结分析，再加以时日练习，方可真正做到形神兼备。以下我就自己对此碑临习时在笔法上的一些浅显的认识和大家作以探讨、学习：
元代大书法家赵孟頫说过：“结字因时相传，用笔千古不易。”是说虽然书体不断的演变，而用笔的方法千年都没有改变。通过一段时间基本笔画的训练，我发现此碑中好多笔画都有形变的现象：如“伯”字中单人旁上一撇，笔画由细到粗，书写时露锋起笔，向左下运笔时向右回锋，称“回锋短撇”。而“仁”字中的撇却与其相反，可作“出锋短撇”笔画由粗到细，书写时藏锋起笔，后向左下方撇出，露锋收笔，出锋力送末端，不要太尖；捺画形变——平捺，比如“近”“人”等这种形变在隶书中比较常见，还有个比较常见的平点，比如“社”“祖”“福”等字，该笔画形态与短横相似。平点要写的平直，不宜过分强调顿挫；提画又称挑画，此碑中挑的形态较为平坦，提按、顿挫不是很明显。提画的形变竖提，如“表”“氏”“长”等，写完竖后，左下方重新起笔写提，切忌行笔取势不能太弯，起笔出锋不能太快、太尖。在隶书中横折的形变也比较突出，如“南”“石”“曰”等在书写时，写完横后，提笔另起，远远高出横画后写竖，此中写法有强烈的空间分割感，但对写好正书却是十分受用；竖钩的形变最为突出，当然隶书中的钩还是一个不太成熟的笔画，大多末端没有向上挑出的钩，如“字”“学”“事”“弓”等
以上这些笔法的形变是我在学习此碑时的一些浅显的认识。

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e|*******#f03;* m342,315 l346,315,346,314,353,314,353,312,367,312,368,313,373,313,373,316,374,317 e|********* m341,319 l372,319 e|********* m339,318 l339,323,340,324,340,319 e|********* m338,316 l338,315,339,315,339,313 e|*******#600;3; m31,40 l31,52,130,52,130,51,132,51,132,39,131,38,131,36,28,36,28,37,27,37,27,39,29,39,30,40,33,40,33,37,32,37,32,39,31,39,31,46 e|********* m47,89 l47,94,46,95,46,110,58,110,58,98,104,98,104,103,103,103,103,108,107,108,109,109,120,109,120,89,115,89,114,88,112,88,110,87,109,87,108,86,52,86 52,88,51,89,51,92,49,92,49,88,50,88 e|********* m73,85 l74,85,74,77,87,77,87,79,88,80,88,85 e|********* m66,110 l97,110,98,111,99,113,99,119,86,119,86,126,102,126,104,128,104,136,88,136,88,137,87,137,86,138,86,146,109,146,109,147,118,147,119,148,121,148,122,149 122,159,87,159,85,157,84,157,84,156,83,156,82,155,81,155,81,154,79,153,78,153,77,151,76,151,75,150,72,150,72,149,71,149,71,148,70,148,70,151 69,152,68,154,68,155,67,155,66,156,54,156,54,158,45,158,45,144,56,144,56,127,61,127,61,138,72,138,72,120,71,120,70,119,63,119,63,109,67,109 67,112 e|********* m71,175 l64,175,63,176,61,176,61,177,58,177,58,178,56,178,55,179,55,180,54,181,54,184,53,185,53,186,52,186,52,188,51,188,51,196,53,198,63,198,64,197 68,197,68,198,67,198,66,199,66,201,65,201,64,202,62,202,62,203,61,203,61,205,60,205,60,206,39,206,39,207,38,207,38,215,55,215,55,219,54,219 54,221,53,223,52,223,49,226,45,226,44,227,39,227,39,228,30,228,30,240,32,240,33,239,34,239,34,238,35,237,38,237,38,236,39,236,41,235,41,234 44,233,50,233,50,232,54,232,54,231,56,230,59,229,61,229,61,228,68,228,68,227,69,225,70,224,70,215,72,217,72,219,73,219,78,224,78,225,79,225 81,227,81,234,82,235,85,235,86,236,87,236,88,237,108,237,108,230,103,230,102,229,100,229,99,228,97,228,95,227,95,226,93,226,93,225,92,225,88,221 88,220,86,218,86,217,85,217,85,216,84,214,84,211,109,211,109,202,91,202,90,201,89,201,88,200,87,200,86,199,79,199,79,197,80,197,80,195,101,195 101,182,97,182,96,181,95,181,94,180,93,180,92,179,86,179,86,187,68,187,68,183,69,183,69,182,72,182,72,181,77,181,77,180,78,180,78,171,66,171 66,175,67,175 e|********* m48,240 l48,247,58,247,58,246,64,246,64,245,66,245,68,244,74,244,74,243,75,243,75,241,76,241,76,231,66,231,66,232,63,232,62,233,60,233,59,235,49,235 49,236,48,236 e|********* m50,253 l50,254,51,257,51,262,54,262,54,261,56,261,56,260,64,259,64,258,82,258,82,257,85,257,85,256,88,256,90,254,90,249,89,249,87,246,86,245,71,245 71,246,52,246,52,254 e|********* m55,271 l59,271,59,270,68,270,68,269,71,268,73,268,82,265,83,265,84,264,86,264,86,263,87,263,88,262,97,262,97,273,96,273,96,274,93,274,93,275,92,276 63,276,63,278,62,278,61,277,61,276,60,275,60,274,58,272,58,274 e|********* m22,313 l36,313,36,297,50,297,51,298,51,300,50,300,49,305,49,311,62,311,63,312,63,319,64,320,64,345,63,345,63,358,62,358,62,362,51,362,51,363,50,363 48,361,47,361,45,359,45,358,43,356,43,348,52,348,52,347,53,347,53,331,51,329,51,322,43,322,43,323,42,325,42,354,41,354,41,358,39,358,39,359 38,359,37,360,34,360,34,361,26,361,25,360,25,359,21,355,21,352,20,352,20,348,28,348,28,347,29,347,29,345,30,345,30,326,19,326,19,314,23,314 23,318 e|********* m81,307 l81,312,80,312,80,313,78,318,78,319,76,322,76,350,84,350,84,349,86,349,86,348,98,348,98,347,100,347,100,345,104,345,104,344,105,344,105,342,106,342 106,341,107,340,107,309,105,309,105,308,103,308,102,307,89,307,89,309,87,309,87,318,95,318,96,319,96,334,83,334,83,309,82,308,78,308,78,310 e|********* m134,320 l133,321,133,323,131,330,130,331,130,332,129,333,129,334,128,335,128,337,127,337,127,341,126,341,126,342,125,342,125,350,133,350,133,321,132,321,131,323,131,324 e|********* m130,360 l120,360,120,366,121,372,129,372,129,371,130,369,131,369,131,368,132,366,132,360,131,360,131,359 e|********* m151,315 l149,316,149,317,148,317,146,321,146,323,145,325,145,347 e|********* m150,313 l151,313,159,314,162,314,164,315,168,315,168,328,167,329,166,329,166,330,164,330,163,331,163,332,162,332,162,333,161,334,160,334,159,335,159,337,156,337,152,339 143,339,143,340,142,340,142,342,147,342,147,338 e|********* m151,353 l149,353,145,355,144,355,142,357,140,357,140,361,142,370,142,371,143,373,159,373,159,354,158,354,158,353,156,351,151,351 e|******#f93;#f93;* m39,44 l85,44,88,45,122,45 e|********* m54,94 l54,95,55,97,55,104,56,102 e|********* m58,91 l65,91,68,93,71,94,75,94,78,96,111,96,111,104,110,106 e|********* m81,81 l80,81,80,88 e|********* m82,122 l82,141 e|********* m74,114 l90,114,90,118 e|********* m86,129 l97,129,97,130,96,130,95,131 e|********* m87,152 l97,152,97,151,118,151 e|********* m58,132 l59,136,59,146 e|********* m59,147 l54,147,54,149,51,149 e|********* m67,177 l61,177,61,180,59,181,59,190,63,190,63,189,77,189 e|********* m95,184 l95,192,94,192,94,194,92,194 e|********* m75,197 l74,198,73,198,73,199,72,201,72,213,71,213,71,221,70,221,70,223,67,224,58,224,58,223,60,223 e|********* m78,215 l79,221,82,224,82,225,87,230,88,230,88,231,102,231,102,228 e|********* m79,203 l79,204,80,204,89,205,93,205 e|********* m68,204 l74,204 e|********* m67,205 l76,205 e|********* m64,207 l63,208,58,208,58,209 e|********* m72,238 l72,239,69,242,61,242,61,243,58,243,58,244 e|********* m61,255 l81,255,81,254,83,254,83,252,84,252,84,251,85,251 e|********* m78,273 l92,273,92,271,93,271,93,264,92,264 e|********* m104,313 l105,319,105,329,104,329,104,333,102,338,102,342 e|********* m79,325 l79,331,78,333,78,338,94,338 e|********* m59,315 l60,319,60,346,59,346,59,347,58,347,58,349,57,349,57,354,56,354,56,350 e|********* m45,298 l45,307,44,312,44,313,43,313,43,323 e|********* m43,330 l43,358,42,358,42,352,43,350 e|********* m28,321 l45,321,46,320,49,320,49,319,50,319,51,318,55,318 e|********* m159,322 l159,327,158,327,158,329,157,329,157,330,156,331,155,333,153,333,153,334,152,334,150,336,150,337,149,337,149,338,147,338 e|********* m152,353 l152,356,151,361,151,362,150,363,150,368,148,368 e|********* m127,363 l127,368,126,368,126,364 e|********* m127,346 l128,346,129,344,129,341 e|******;#600;* m266,316 l260,316,255,317,252,318,249,318,248,319,247,319,247,324,246,324,246,326,245,328,244,328,244,329,243,332,242,333,242,335,241,335,241,360,242,361,242,363,252,363 252,362,254,362,256,360,258,360,258,359,259,358,259,356,261,354,261,321,262,321,262,317,263,317,263,315,266,314,271,312,261,315,259,315 e|********* m217,350 l210,353,206,353,206,354,205,355,205,358,204,358,204,380,205,383,213,383,213,382,215,379,215,378,216,376,216,353,217,353,217,352,219,352,219,351,221,351,221,347 212,347,212,348,210,348,210,349,209,349,209,351,208,351,208,353 e|********* m281,298 l280,298,280,299,278,301,277,301,277,302,275,302,275,303,274,303,274,305,273,305,273,307,272,307,272,319,271,321,271,334,272,335,272,336,275,339,276,339,276,340 279,343,288,343,288,341,289,341,289,324,288,323,287,321,282,316,282,303 e[/whitepad]

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平野堂主

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谷国伟

原帖由 郭名高 于 2007-9-17 18:07 发表

                               
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革命精神不能挫败em2局部

临的好呀！～
老兄不出门就有人探讨书法，羡慕！

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我也斋

原帖由 谷国伟 于 2007-9-15 11:48 发表

                               
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        刚刚临的，就临了一部分，算是支持一下自己的工作，液恳请众方家批评指正！好久不临了，感觉很生疏！

临得好呀!学习了!!!

谷国伟

原帖由 书法人1 于 2007-9-18 20:43 发表

                               
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初学写这么好，你还让会写字的人活不让？em4 em4